Essay is a collection of really interesting topics with strong connection between experience and architecture. Would have liked to see more specificity (and citations), even within the word limitations. Connection to research, including the author's own, is really intriguing (but could have been the place for more detail). Mature level of thinking.
-Gail Brager


The argument is very strong and convinced. The image is abstract but somehow express the main idea of the essay to some extent.
-Xudong Zhu